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 ==PREAMBLE==
-Since Taekwon-Do is an art of self-defence which aims at a noble moral rearmament, high degree of intellectual achievement, graceful techniques, formidable power and beauty of physical form, it can be considered as a part of
+Since Taekwon-Do is an art of self-defence which aims at a noble moral rearmament, high degree of intellectual achievement, graceful techniques, ((formidable power - removed per the text of the condensed encyclopedia)) and beauty of physical form, it can be considered as a part of
 one’s daily life, just as are breathing and thinking.
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 ==PART 5.==
-Modern society is characterised by selfish preoccupation with material excess and unnecessary dependence upon machines. Moral society is characterised by self discipline, sacrifice, and devotion. Dedication to the art
+Modern society is characterised by selfish preoccupation with material excess and unnecessary dependence upon machines. Moral society is characterised by self discipline, sacrifice, mutual help((added per the text of the condensed encyclopedia pg 9)) and devotion. Dedication to the art can promote change toward ((minor text adjustment per the condensed encyclopedia - the word "a" was removed here))moral society.
-can promote change toward a moral society.
 ==PART 6.==